My awesome story web

 During reading time we read a story. Our group read the story called the Beast of Moogill by Bren MacDibble. It is a story about Tim and Meep they were going to save the king from the cat named Rusty. Then rustys tail was on top of his head and tim's nose was upside down .

We had to write out the characters setting problem outcome and actions in a story

I think that this  story web was easy.
Can you please comment on the hard work I have done?
 

This is my descriptive wirting

😛This week Miss Lee asked us to write a fabulous recount about our weekend.

I chose to write about about what i did in my weekend. I used adjectives similes and  metaphors.                                   Can you spot  my similes  adjectives and metaphors?