I am a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, March 25, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Steven,
ReplyDelete1. Good job Steven on describing your character.
2. I like how you started with who Captain Underpants is.
3. Could you add more detail about how Captain Underpants defeated Professor Poopypants.
You did well, keep going!
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ReplyDeleteHi Steven
ReplyDelete1. Good job.
2. I like that you added details in your writing.
3. I think you should add more discriptions in it about captain under patns. Thats nice writing keep going.