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Thursday, July 25, 2019

my weekend

On my school holidays i went to see lion king and then the next day we went to watch toy story 
And then we went to my cousins house because it was his birthday. he turned eight then we ate some of the cake then for my cousins present we took him to bowling then we went to go to the movies to watch aladin. it was funny because the monkey stole the girls bracelet then it got weird because the evil guy wanted to mary the princess the we went back home with cousin then when we got home we made a box fort then we put our matres out in our box fort  then we cut a little hole then so we can plug the tv in then we played fortnite 


I like how you told us the storyline for the movie Aladdin and why you found it funny.
I was also planning on watching Aladdin but the movie was all sold out so I had to watch Lion King.
Can you read through and check you have the correct punctuation in all the right places. 
I am also wondering why you have pictures of Fortnite when you mainly talked about the different movies you watched.
Keep going with your awesome writing!

Miss Lee

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