this is my persuasive writing that i wrote
Tuesday, August 4, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hi Steven
ReplyDeleteI like how you put reasons about how you want to do p.e. everyday!
I also Like how you put "we will get more fit and faster"!
you can also put more detail on the reasons.
do you have more ideas on the reasons? also can you put more reasons about why should we have p.e everyday?
have a good day and keep on doing the good work!
Hi Steven
ReplyDeleteI that you gave reasons why you wanted to have P.E.
Did you think about writing different words
Use more then one word not the same ones
Can you please add more reasons
From Alex
HI steven
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By Grace
good job but can you giving me some more reson about what you you were doing from JT
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