I am a student at St Bernadette’s School.. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, December 3, 2019
SLJ activity teaser week
my cousin on Biteable. hey bloggers this is my biteable about my cousin paul can you please comment on my hard work
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hey steven
ReplyDeletei like how you made a video
I also have a cousine
next time please make and ending part
bye steven
Kia ora Steven!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Mikey. I'm a member of the Summer Learning Journey team this year and I'll be commenting on some of your blog post this summer. I'm so pleased that you've made a start on the teaser week activities - well done! :)
It's so wonderful that you get a long with your cousin so well. What are your favourite things to do together? I have lots of cousins too. When we were kids were used to spend lots of time together, like you and your cousin, but now that we're older and people have moved to different cities we don't see each as much. Do you and your cousin live close to each other?
Congratulations again on completing your first teaser week task! Remember that the programme officially begins next Monday (December 16th), so be sure to check out the Week 1 activities then. In the meantime, have a go at another teaser week activity. I'd love to see more posts from you. :)
Bye for now,
Mikey
Hi Steven
ReplyDeleteI like your video about your cousin and you get along with him so well. I feel your video was not finished? Maybe next time add more detail. Keep up the good work.
Miss Rader
Hi Steven
ReplyDeleteGood work on your video about your cousin.
Maybe next time you could add some more details. What else you do together apart from sharing lollies?
Mrs Bowman